I hope the feedback was okay–sometimes I just blurt things out and the good intentions behind them don’t always come across! I really am enjoying the story, especially the way you capture Mac’s personal interactions. There’s just a very raw honesty there that feels authentic, like the whole scene between him and the grocer’s daughter in the store–it gave me chills because I could totally see that whole scene with a young girl having only a vague sense that she has the power to arrouse a man without realizing the details of what’s actually running through his head! I think capturing those interactions is definitely one of your greater strengths.

I hope that noggin of yours is feeling better! Head injuries always scare me, so I hope you’re listening to Lil Mouse and letting her keep an eye on it! Heal up soon and give my regards to LM!